Hey uh, this probably won't pass. For one, your cargo bay is just a hole in the side of your shuttle.
Mooncrasher no like that. Secondly, your payload bay is really small! It's not explicitly stated, but when Mooncrasher grades shuttles, he wants your shuttle to be a le to at least launch 10% of its launch mass. Finally, that just looks bad! The clashing silver, white, orange and grey make your shuttle look ugly.