The 5th image shows that a Valiant is destroyed, probably because of impact on the Moon. The Instructions stated that nothing must be damaged except dumped stages. This will not qualify.
I suggest that you retry this mission by adding landing legs to the Lander, so engines or other parts won't be damaged.
And, don't forget quicksaves! Create a quicksave every time you do something important (e.g. lunar injection burn, landing, etc.), so if something is damaged or not going to plan, you could rewind time and fix things so it'll be successful.
Those aside, I like that trajectory shooting upwards with the Moon on a correct position, so you'd get an encounter easily.