STORY CONTEST!

BANDWITH

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Post your stories here. They will be judged to the top 10 (or less depending on how many stories there are) in a poll on the 15th or somewhere around then. There will be NO EXPRESSION OF HOW YOU FEEL ABOUT ANY STORY (COMMENTING), EXEPT FOR LIKING. Make sure to give your story a title. It must have at least 300 words, but it cannot be too long.
You have to comment to post your story here, and that's the only exeption to the rules, silly. :rolleyes::p
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BANDWITH

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NONFICTION EXAMPLE:
Many people look up at the night sky towards the steady orange glow known as Mars. For thousands of years, humans have wished to go to that little peachy spot, fueled by curiosity and wonder.

Going to Mars is a big topic among space industries. A few space industries have already decided to take on the challenge. These companies, private and commercial, are NASA, SpaceX, and Blue Origin. Two of those companies are currently developing super-heavy-lifting rockets, known as the Big Falcon Rocket (SpaceX) and the Space Launch System (NASA) that are supposed to be completed by the early 2020s. These rockets are classified as super-heavy-lift due to being able to transport 50 or more metric tons (110,000lbs) to low earth orbit (LEO).

The BFR, proposed by SpaceX, was hinted at before 2016 as the Mars Colonial Transporter. After 2016, annual updates of the Big Falcon Rocket have been held by Elon Musk, the creator of SpaceX, who said it would make the human species interplanetary. Some designs and specifications of the vehicle were revealed, like the shape of the upper part, the ITS. The first design had three large landing leg shrouds that would be used for a vertical landing. The second design had a delta wing near the engines, which would be used to land safely on the ground. The third design employs five ‘wings’, two of which are used to let the rocket fall similar to how a skydiver would. The front two are canard wings, and the vertical one is purely decorative.

The BFR has many other intended purposes other than Mars. These uses are commercial Earth to Earth passenger flights, and payloads to Earth orbit and beyond. The payloads it can carry can be up to 9 meters (30 ft) in length. Mars Colonization with this rocket would be very simple. Several unmanned BFRs would land on Mars and drop off supplies for a base. Then people would come on a different BFR and set up this outpost, where they would grow plants and fabricate parts and fuel to send the rockets back home to gather more supplies and people to expand the base.

The SLS on the other hand, is a different story. NASA released the plans to the world in September of 2014. They intends the SLS to be a replacement to the space shuttle, a frequently used spaceship of the past. The resemblance is striking -both of the rockets are painted very similarly. Four designs of the SLS are being designed, all with their different purposes and payloads. More similarities include solid rocket boosters, very similar to that of the space shuttle, except that the space shuttle used four segment SRBs rather than 5 segment ones like the SLS. The plan to get humans to mars with the SLS is very different from that of the BFR. Several launches would send a space station and a base to the moon, and then send supplies to Mars to be built into a base one the Astronauts got there. The vehicle that got the Astronauts would be assembled in orbit in several missions. Eventually, an Orion spacecraft would send the crew to the Mars vehicle, which would dock with the lunar space station, where it would refuel, and then get back on its way.

The SLS would also serve other purposes. One of them plans to send a probe to Europa, a moon of Jupiter, where it would study it more thoroughly than any probe before it could, by sending down a drill and submarine to explore the possible water ocean under the surface.

These rockets both have their fare share of quirks and mission ideas and could even work together one day. But for now, we still wait to see the Earth as the pale dot in the sky.
 

BANDWITH

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FICTION EXAMPLE:
Once upon a time there was a prophecy written by the Great Wizards of Bilsdorf! It said there would be a chosen one that would save the 4 worlds from some evil dude for some reason!


Ok so Jim woke up that one morning in Batfartville and went outside and the village was on FIRE!

"MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Said this evil looking guy in some neato looking pants made of the many floppy eyes of Glargfogs!

"MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! I WILL BURN DOWN THIS VILLAGE! TOTALLY NO CONSEQUENCES SHOULD OCCUR FROM REVENGE BY THE PEOPLE THAT LIVE HERE! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

Jim said "Oh no! I must run away from this tragic travesty that is burning my home village!" So Jim ran and ran from his home and he was sad about all those things and people that got burned to death or something, especially his heirloom heirloom tomatoes!


"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Jim yelled as he ran! He ran like his shoes were on fire (I think they were)! He ran until he came to this funky disco octopus!

"Hi I am a disco octopus and I am also a guy that will help you be a hero or something!"

"OH! That is very useful disco octopus! Tell me your name, kind sir!"

"I am Piscozrudisowdtaco!"

"Huh! I’ll call you Taco!"

"NO! That name is for those who are to be eaten! I won’t be eaten so said the prophecy!"

"Ok I’ll call you Pisco!"

"Fine!" Then said Jim:

"Teach me to be a hero!"

"Ok!" Said Piscozrudisowdtaco! "Jump over that rock!" Jim jumped over the rock! Piscozrudisowdtaco said:

"Ok here is a sword now you are a hero!"


"Ok let’s now go on a journey so I can find some people to save and maybe a girlfriend! Come on Piscozrudisowdtaco!" So they went on their way! They saved some villages from certain doom by bad building locations and poor architecture! In one town being eaten by laser slugs, Jim saved the mayor’s single daughter! "Yeah I’m going to make out with you or something right now!"

"OK!" So they did, with over dramatized smooching noises!


"Ok lets go beat that evil dude that is being mean and stuff so I can get revenge!" said Jim!

"We don’t even know where he is!" Said His Girlfriend!

"I think I know!" Said Piscozrudisowdtaco!


They went to this building with a big sign that said P.E.T.A.!

"OH NO!" Yelled Piscozrudisowdtaco! "The sign reads in ancient text: People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals! (Man people were so lazy back then!)"

"MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! I can go on forever doing that, but this story would be too long and boring for anyone to read, so yeah!" Said that evil looking dude from the beginning of the story! "MUAHAHA-- wait no! I must attack you for no reason! But wait -an introduction to me- MUAHAHAHA! I am the evil GREGOR THE GREAT! I’m a DARK LORD! See look! My pants agree (eyeball pants insue flopping of agreement)!

"You can’t stop me! I’M INVINCIBLE! Now I will attack you, sorry you had to wait!"

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Shouted Piscozrudisowdtaco, Jim and His Girlfriend!

"Wait! I have a sword!" Jim realized! SWORD CUT! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH!

"Ow! You will know that hurts in a second!" Hollered Gregor! More sword swishing insues!

"Oh no! All is lost! I am pinned down! Piscozrudisowdtaco, help me!" Yelled Jim, who was now duct-taped to a wall!

"Ok! FYI I’m a wizard!" Replied Piscozrudisowdtaco, pulling out eight magic wands from somewhere! Magic! Magic! Magic! Magic! Magic! Magic! Magic! Magic! POOOF!

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Not disco magic!" Cried Gregor as he melted into a puddle of goop and molten disco balls!

"Ok I’m going home now have a good time and name one of your children after me please!" Said Piscozrudisowdtaco now wearing a wizard hat and entering a portal. Then a twisted, knotted and bent line then flew from the fourth wall and landed in the dust.
 

Danny Batten

Sanctor **《T》** MT/SP/TE/ Governor of Terra SOI
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Post your stories here. They will be judged to the top 10 (or less depending on how many stories there are) in a poll on the 15th or somewhere around then. There will be NO EXPRESSION OF HOW YOU FEEL ABOUT ANY STORY (COMMENTING), EXEPT FOR LIKING. Make sure to give your story a title. It must have at least 300 words, but it cannot be too long.
You have to comment to post your story here, and that's the only exeption to the rules, silly. :rolleyes::p
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Once upon a time there was John. John was a squirrel, he liked nuts, everyone liked nuts. What can you expect?
The problem was he didn’t know where the nuts were. A big dilemma for a squirrel. He searched far and wide, but there were no nuts to be found! A large dilemma indeed. John sleeped uneasily, he couldn’t get nuts out of his head, you could say he was going nuts.........sorry...

He woke up slowly the next morning, to find a single nut on the floor of his den.
“Where did this come from” said John. Then said “wait! I can talk now?” Laying carfully on the top of the nut was a note, not in the best handwriting ether.
The note said,
“Dear John,
I have all the nuts in the forest! You’ll get nothing!
You definitely won’t find them! Because they are in the best hiding place I could think of!”
From,
Squirrel of doom!
“Hmmm” said John. “I’ll need to try to think like a squirrel” which surprisingly enough wasn’t difficult.
John searched for as long as his legs could scurry, not far.
5 long hours past before he gave up and went home.

As he walked back inside, he noticed some mud on his designer grass mat.
“Where dose this lead?” Thought John. He followed it up to his bed, to find another letter,
“Dear John,
I am here to inform you the whereabouts of the missing nuts”
“What?” Said John. He continued to read.
“You will get a visitor soon.
Signed,
The Strange Squirrel.”
*nock nock nock* goes Johns door.
Is that the stranger? John walked slowly to the door.. to find! ........... the mailman.
It turned out the nuts fell from the tree, and got colle by some fellow squirrels.

“Oh.” Thought John “I Thought it would be more interesting. Oh well”
John commenced in to a feast for kings!!!

John was found dead in his tree the next morning, he was murdered!!!
No, he died from overeating........what did you expect? Something else?
You should be ashamed of yourself, this is not an action mov...*tree explodes*
Narrator; fuck it, I’m out. The hell is this story!
 

Horus Lupercal

Primarch - Warmaster
Professor
Swingin' on a Star
Deja Vu
Biker Mice from Mars
ET phone home
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#5
Random as tits, but I'll bite.

3 Bears

One day, there was 3 little bears...
Well, generally there are more bears, they ain't that endangered
Anti-social bears
More of a bear cult really
So, this bear cult is against the Law. And the Law shows up, led by Chief Justice G. Locks.

The Bears hide.

The Law breaks down the door, but the house looks empty.
'They must be gone' says the lead Lawman.
'No', says Chief Justice Locks. 'They are here'
'How can you tell?'
At this, the Chief Justice smiled
'Look at the chairs. Someone has been sitting in them'
'And the beds are unmade, as if someone has not long been sleeping in them'
'Look, the stove is still on. See, warm porridge!'. Search the house, find them.

Of course. The Bears tried to hide well, but even though they were only little bears, little bears are still quite large in the scheme of things and were found in the attic
It becomes a siege.
The Bears wouldn't come down, and the Law couldn't go up.
No amount of negotiations would coax them into surrender
After all, cultist bears are fanatical, and won't surrender easily

So, Chief Justice G. Locks decided on a plan.
A specialist was brought in
An ultimatum was delivered.

'I normally only do this on Pigs' said the specialist.
'I know, but its a house isn't it?' reasoned the Chief Justice.
'Aye, it is' growled the Big Bad Wolf, moving towards the house, taking a deep breath.

'little bears, little bears, come out now, or i will blow your house down!
You'll never take us alive copper!'
Came the shout from the attic window. 'Not whilst we have hairs on our chins!'

A soundwave erupted from the Wolf, a wall of pure noise and force. At first the glass started to rattle as it built up and suddenly the air seemed to distort in front of the Big Bad Wolf and launched in a cone towards the house.
A huge furrow a foot deep tore in the grass, following the sonically tortured air throwing dirt and grass aside.
Sonic wall hit house wall with a thunderclap of over pressure and a scream of tortured beams as the cone annihilated the front section of the house to splinters and blasting out the back wall.
Everything not secured to the foundations was ripped from the house and ejected out, beds, chairs, porridge and bears.
Spalling sections of woodwork became shrapnel and cut lethal arcs through the air, slicing into fur as they tumbled through the air.

'Most impressive' the Chief Justice nodded, removing the ear protection from over her blonde locks.
She walked towards the bears. All 3 little bears were clearly badly injured and buried amongst the ejected flotsam of what had been a house. The hurried sounds of medical teams followed her.
'Such is the fate of all Lawbreakers' she sneers to the bleeding bears, and turns away, leaving the clean up crews to the task.
 

Bananas

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Apollo 11/Space Race
Many people dreamed of going to the moon. But in 1969, that dream became reality. Neil Amstrong, Buzz Aldrin, and Michael Collins blasted off on the mammoth, 363 foot Saturn V. This mission was a big step for NASA, as well as a big step for humanity.

The mission started as what is now known as the “Space race”. Basically, it was a race to see who was the most powerful nation in spaceflight capacity. The winning factor was to get to the moon. 2 big nations were allies in World War II. After World War II, they came to hate each other due to the United States being a Republic and the Soviet Union being communist nation. This time period is known as the Cold War.

The space race started on Friday, October 4, 1957, when the Soviet Nation launched Sputnik 1, the first artificial human satellite to orbit the earth. This created tensions as people were afraid the Soviet Union could spy on the U.S.A with their satellites. The United States quickly struck back, 4 months later, on January 31, 1958, with the launch of Explorer 1 on a Mercury Redstone rocket. On April 12, 1961, the Soviet Union launched the first man in space. Yuri Gagarin blasted off on Vostok 1, orbiting the earth for 108 minutes. The United Space were beaten again. On May 5, 1961, Alan Shepard became the first American in space. Although he didn’t achieve orbit like Gagarin, he controlled his space manually with retro rockets. American president John F. Kennedy, said in a speech after Alan Shepard's flight, “I believe that this nation should commit itself to achieving the goal, before this decade is out, of landing a man on the Moon and returning him safely to the Earth. No single space project in this period will be more impressive to mankind, or more important for the long-range exploration of space, and none will be so difficult or expensive to accomplish.”

There were many space programs leading up to the Apollo program including the Mercury and Vostok programs, the Gemini and Voskhod programs. The Soviets achieved the first spacewalk and the U.S.A achieved the first docking. But at the beginning of the Apollo program, disaster struck. During a ground test, Command Pilot Virgil "Gus" Grissom, Senior Pilot Ed White, and Pilot Roger Chaffee were killed in a fire that swept through their capsule. The United States recovered from the tragedy, sending people in Lunar orbit later in the Apollo program.

On July 19, 1969, history was about to be made. Saturn V blasted off from Cape Canaveral Florida sending Neil Amstrong, Buzz Aldrin, and Michael Collins to the moon. The rocket was a 3 stage rocket, with the command module and lunar module at the top. The command module and lunar module would dock together in space. The astronauts would mostly stay in the command module until they got into lunar orbit. Then, Neil Armstong and Buzz Aldrin would climb into the lunar module and it would separate from the command module. The lunar module would take them down to the moon and land there. The command module was named Columbia. The lunar module was named Eagle. Saturn V lifted off at 9:32:00 and achieved orbit 12 minutes later. It started its trans-lunar injection at 16:22:13 UTC. Now, it was on its way to the moon. On July 19 at 17:21:50 UTC, Apollo 11 passed behind the Moon and fired its service propulsion engine to enter lunar orbit. On July 20, at 17:44, Eagle separated from Columbia. The Eagle landed at 20:17:40 UTC on Sunday, July 20 with about 25 seconds of fuel left. At 2:51, Neil Armstrong prepared to make history. He slowly climbed down the ladder with his words, “That's one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind.” Buzz Aldrin came down shortly later. The astronauts quickly set up experiments such as EASEP, which included a Passive Seismic Experiment Package used to measure moonquakes and a retroreflector array used for the Lunar Laser Ranging experiment. They also planted an American flag and collected soil and lunar rock samples. Finally, the planted a plaque that said, Here men from the planet Earth first set foot upon the Moon, July 1969 A.D. We came in peace for all mankind.

Before July 1969, people thought that going to the moon was impossible. But on July 20, 1969, that dream became reality. Neil Armstrong and Buzz Aldrin stepped on the moon, what few men have ever done. And the words Neil Armstrong first said when he stepped foot on the moon, “That's one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind.” That really was one giant leap for mankind.
 

Aiden

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Id love to take part in this but 1. My stories are in welsh and 2. I dont have the time or power to write it out. And yes I'm jealous that you have the neccecery time

(Sorry for chatting)