That's definitely just fine! Only some advice, you use Hawks everywhere. It's inefficient and all that thrust is not needed for upper stages and payloads. In future, consider the Valiant instead for this size build.
I’m sorry I never saved the rocket and when I finished I did the Interstellar mission. But I can remake the rocket. I have just finished recreating the rocket. It was easy since I used a different rocket as the template. Here is the photo. Edited by Dyson Sphere