Looks like you've accidentaly posted some parts of your mission multiple times (no wonder the pics didn't fit into a single post
). You also might want to consider posting some of the less critical parts of the mission as thumbnails, so that the post is more compact and easier to read. You should also check out some of the tutorials on the forums to get better at designing more efficient rockets (It will be handy once you attempt the harder challenges). Other than that, this should be an easy pass.